on the third day of Christmas
sparrows rattling the leaves
along the driveway
somewhere a skylark, singing
and Martin Guptill just hit another six

a drowsy bell-bird
sounding like a hangover
the dog sprawls in the shade
and a lazy bee idles
in the lavender

© Maureen Sudlow

This is experimental – I would welcome feedback…

24 thoughts on “EXPERIMENTAL SOUND

  1. Count me in, reading melodic, I could use a bit more volume if I knew how to operate sound on my Ipad. All in all, delightful and innovative ! I shall anticipate your studied improvements, haha ! I wish you a Happy New Year. We watched it at 6 AM on local TV, can you imagine, diect from NZ!

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